What I was struck with was that it had a limerick in it. And it’s not a bad one! I do think that Crystal Jones (If that is her real name!) kind of screwed up the rhythm on that last line. Also some other minor things bother me. I can’t even draw a stick figure correctly, so I’m not complaining. But I think it would have been better like this:
When she won a free facial and ped
It sure stuck in her craw
When she got to the spa
Seems her lips were too small for her head!
But I don’t know. I’ll have to run it past the Grand Poobah of all things limerick, Mad Kane. But she may be
madangry at me; she never responded to my birthday limerick—which I worked very hard on!